The story about a Pokémon Trainer Named Rei Suffering From "Nuzlockism" (*1),
Not to mention that her parents suffer from PokéPhobia , which is obviously implied to be the fear of Pokémon , was a nice touch, as I could theorize that the Nuzlockism would only make the situation worse or even funnier, ur choice . . .
But any ways , from the one page alone , the comic brings humor and or deep story lines to the table , I would love to read more of this, let alone it would be an honor to speak with u or work alongside (*2) .
Current Points -
Art Style - 5/5 (*3)
Humor - 4/5 (*4)
Spelling - 4/5 (*5) .
Dark Stuff - 4.5/5 (*6) .
Total - 17.5/20 or 87.5% , Keep Up The InCredible Work, Miss Rei .
*1 - Nuzlockism - The Term I Gave For Trainers That Are In The NuzLocke Universe
*2 - Co Workers - Best For U To Work Solo , but If u actually want to work together HOLY ARCEUS ! ! 1 . . . L e w l .
*4 - The Humor - Deus Ex Machina, although it would be funny to see Rei getting played for fool's or messed around like the popular but underrated twitch stream, "Twitch Plays Pokémon" .
*5 - The Spelling Errors - I took half a point off for each spelling error, spelling police kicked in and or took control, pls do not hate meh .
*6 - The Dark Stuff - The Fact that her parents suffer from Poképhobia, plus the fact that it can be implied that they did not trust her going into the world of Pokémon alone, is quite the dark but a curious element too .
@redztheultrakard: Thank you for rating my comic. It was fun for me to read your thoughts regarding it and seeing the rating you gave, I was kinda surprised to receive such a high rating.
I knew I had done some spelling mistakes, which doesn't surprise me considering I had to redo the text on paint with a broken mouse that did not let me adjust the lenght and I was also being distracted by family members. Hopefully I will be able to make as little mistakes as possible, since english isn't my native language I will not be able to completely have no mistakes. :3
I do plan to have cameo appearences of friends and maybe people from other comics (through I would need to talk to the owners of those comics first) with mini stories for fun. Those mini stories will help to get to know Rei and the pokemon she will have. I plan to ask around for cameos towards near the first town and have small rps with them.
I dont think I mentioned this but Rei is basicaly a version of myself, but with a somewhat different background and somebody who was born in the pokemon world, which helps me put in more feelings towards flashbacks and certain emotions and experiences.
The dark stuff....weeeeeelllll the reason why they didn't let her go on a journey or have a pokemon isn't about trust it's something else, which will be revealed in future pages.(I dont wanna spoil it, but only one parent has Pokephobia).
Oh and if you would like to talk I would love to, but I wont be a fast replier because of my current exams. Also just call me Rei. :3
P.s. I'm hoping to finish the next page next week. I already started working on some line art.
Rei: ( Pun InTended ) .
@ReiTheCS: From The Two Days That I Have Been Here (Lol) , Nuzlockes Seem To Have Caught Meh Eye , Not To Mention The Projection Of UrSelf In The Pokémon Verse (*1) .
In Other News , It Has Just Occurred To Meh That English Was Not Ur First Language , Give A Point Back .
And Friends/Family , It Would Be Great To See Them In The Phantom Verse ( Ur WebComic's Verse), Also , If I Do Find An Artist Soon , I May Actually Start Meh Own WebComic , "Game Chasers: Heroes Of Time (*2) , Plus It Would Be Realleh Neat To Have A Character Liek Ashachu (*3) .
Ooo , Now I Am Realleh Interested In The Dark Stuff (People On Reddit Making Random Or Just Outrageous Theories Here We Come , Lmao) .
Also , Take Ur Time On The Replies , Ur Education And Or Comics Are More Important .
P S - Neato , I Can Not Wait To Read More , Mi - - . . . Just Rei (Have To Take A Note Of That , Lol) .
@redztheultrakard Lol, I also enjoy reading other peoples nuzlockes. One of my fav is Nuzrea. I dunno if you read it, but you can find a dubbed version on youtube or read it on deviantart. Her username there is Skitea.
Yay I got a point back lol. :D
Cool I would love to see your comic. :3
I got only 1 friend who doesnt mind, but I do plan on asking some of my close friends.
Pfft, I have an affinity to torturing my ocs and my SI would get just as much. My slightly sadistic nature will also be mentioned in the comic as soon as I (Rei) relaxes a bit.
Thank you!~ My comic will be coming out this month a bit slowly because of exams, but June should be a bit more relaxed.
P.s. Sticky notes help lol. I use them a lot :D
The new page is out. Enjoy!~
AnyHow , I Am AlWays Open To Be Asked , =^P , L e w l .
But Sadism , Great To Hear That Rei ( U ) Will Have Sadism .
But As AlWays , Take Ur Time , Education/Personal Life > Comics .
P S - I Use -
1 - Docs For Character Bios .
2 - Discord For Chatting With Artists Or What Ever Else .
3 - Sketch For Art , AlThough I Need A New Phone ( Literally , It's Broken Beyond Belief ) .
4 - SmackJeeves For Comics .
5 - Some Thin ' Else That I Forgot .
I Promise That I Will At Least Have The Front Cover For Game Chaser Done In ( By A Miracle , Two Days ? ? ) .
I don't really hang around tumblr a lot, I have one, but only use it to follow other artists who usually post most of their stuff there instead of other paces. But that article was really irritating(I usually feel really strong emotions regarding bullying and abuse that it may cause me to rage for hours.) to read. Really want to punch one of those.....beepers....in the face.